My third chapter is up for critique on Scribophile in my personal spotlight. If you have an account there and favorite me, you’ll get a karma bonus for giving a crit. It costs 5 points to post a critique and I usually get 1-2 points per critique. I’m almost always trying to scrape up karma, so I’ll give just about anything a crit. What I’m saying is, if you give me a critique, you’ll get at least one back. I can almost promise that.
This chapter is also the first time my main character speaks to his romantic interest. I’m hoping they show a bit of chemistry even though neither one of them is thinking about the possibility. This makes several references to trans issues. It’s a minor character, but I thought some might be interested to know.