Pigeon House part 3.1 is up on Scribophile

My third chapter is up for critique on Scribophile in my personal spotlight. If you have an account there and favorite me, you’ll get a karma bonus for giving a crit. It costs 5 points to post a critique and I usually get 1-2 points per critique. I’m almost always trying to scrape up karma, so I’ll give just about anything a crit. What I’m saying is, if you give me a critique, you’ll get at least one back. I can almost promise that.

This chapter is also the first time my main character speaks to his romantic interest. I’m hoping they show a bit of chemistry even though neither one of them is thinking about the possibility.  This makes several references to trans issues. It’s a minor character, but I thought some might be interested to know. 

 

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